Critique

Notes

• connection to place, her tunnels and physically in the perspective of going into the tunnel

• sound is echoing

• binaural

• smell of water

• dampness

• change in intensity of contrast

• the middle one is highest in contrast and visually striking

• sense of speed

• sensations, moving fast

• sense of movement even with map overlayed

• hurricane, planet, like big bang

• a wormhole, bacterial

• screenprinting in the sense of material and printing process, the stamps of bacteria and the maps

• overlapping is like bone

• the colours and angles change throughout the pieces and the tunnel looks longer in the left (b&w print)

• the maps and bacteria overlayed almost make it look flat and the hole looks smaller

• the perspective changes with the diagram lines

• use of material in centre piece (large good paper) seems more established and archival, as if it is out of a street art magazine while others look more diy

• a proper print is more centred and the paper makes the centre one stand out

• the pieces almost analyse the grafitti making it seem scientific

• looks decomposed

• the centre one makes it unclear if the sizing is intentional; is the paper and image sizing on purpose? it looks like an impression of a tunnel

• the map looks like a tunnel system which shows a diagram of how the tunnel operates underneath the image of the tunnel (physcially) while it is shown literally above the image

• the mapping system- is it like stored water, how is it connected to water?

• good to have on all 3 fabrics; it will create depth, and the focal point would provide a 3d view if on the wall

• the tunnel draws people in

• the different layers can be seperated and can all come together in the final presentation